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It is considered that nowadays it is becoming very common that over-fishing in my countries.

It is considered that nowadays it is becoming very common that over-fishing in my countries. mAGr
It is considered that nowadays it is becoming very common that over-fishing in my countries. In my opinion, it has negative impact on sea life. The reason behind this is that the over-fishing reduces the population of unique animals which can only be found in sea because of which some of the animals are near to extinct and due to this kind of trend they will be vanished from this world if we all will not take a stance in order to save them. In order to respect the nature, the human being should leave his greed behind and make this world livable for every living being. In addition, the over-fishing is taking place due to rise in demand of sea food because of which many people are earning their livelihood by exploiting this natural creature. For Instance- It is reported that the fins of whales are cut to make soup which is very popular in China and people are paying hefty price for that. Moreover, it has negative impact on sea because it disrupts the food chain because of which many animals will get affected, whereas these creatures try to make sea clear and make it healthier rather than polluting it which human beings are doing. While in order to save these creatures for future generations and to enjoy the sea food for the longer future it is better to reduce the over fishing in which especially the government should also take strict measures. In Conclusion, to save the sea life the human should change its behavior and provide a space for the nature to grow and show its natural colors rather than destroying it on daily basis.
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common that over-fishing in my countries. In my opinion, it has
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impact on
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sea
life.

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reduces
the population of unique animals which can
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sea
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because
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some of the
animals are near to extinct and due to this kind of trend they will
be vanished
from this world if we all will not take a stance in order to save them. In order to respect the nature, the human being should
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leave
his greed behind and
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make
this world livable for every living being.
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, the over-fishing is taking place due to rise in demand of
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sea
food
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because
of which
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many
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people
are earning their livelihood by exploiting this natural creature.
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is reported
that the fins of whales are
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cut
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make
soup which is
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very
popular in China and
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people
are paying hefty price for that.

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negative
impact on
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sea
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because
it disrupts the food chain
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animals will
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, whereas these creatures try to
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make
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sea
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clear
and
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make
it healthier
rather
than polluting it which human beings are doing. While in order to save these creatures for future generations and to enjoy the
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sea
food for the longer future it is better to
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reduce
the over fishing in which
especially
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government
should
also
take strict measures.

In Conclusion
, to save the
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sea
life the human should
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change
its behavior and provide a space for the nature to grow and
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show
its natural colors
rather
than destroying it on daily basis.
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IELTS essay It is considered that nowadays it is becoming very common that over-fishing in my countries.

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4 paragraphs
279 words
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