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Advertising has become a medium through which one can market their product, make more business and reach out to people.

Advertising has become a medium through which one can market their product, make more business and reach out to people. NR5N
Advertising has become a medium through which one can market their product, make more business and reach out to people. It is a platform where a retailer can launch his product meeting consumer requirements. The essay will discuss if it is good or bad to do advertising. I agree to the fact that advertising is going to be more beneficial to the mankind where they will be introduced to new product that has been launched in the market. It will help the people who are struggling with age old techniques of using a product and the new product may turn their life in to a real merry. Few years back, TV ads were only source of ad making where their favorite celebrity used to market the product. Now-a-days, social media and online shopping have joined the club and has become source of advertisement. The main idea of advertisement is to give choice to the people and only selecting the product which meets the requirement if they fall within the consumer's range. It is mostly helpful to people in remote and rural areas who have minimum exposure to any of the new product launch and online shopping is going to be of great help. Along with advantages, we do have disadvantages as people will be encouraged to buy a products which aren't required. Also, some buyers may get attracted to the product if it has been marketed by their favorite celebrity and may spend even it is beyond their reach. As I see more advantages than disadvantages, I think advertising is a boon to buyers and sellers as long as it is controlled and maintained properly.
Advertising has become a medium through which one can market their
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product
,
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make
more business and reach out to
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people
. It is a platform where a retailer can launch his
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product
meeting consumer requirements. The essay will discuss if it is
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good
or
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bad
to
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go advertising".
do advertising
.

I
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agree
to the fact that advertising is going to be more beneficial to the mankind where they will
be introduced
to new
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product
that has
been launched
in the market. It will
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help
the
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people
who are struggling with age
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old
techniques of using a
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product
and the new
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product
may turn their life in to a real merry. Few years back, TV ads were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
source of ad making where their favorite celebrity
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to market the
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product
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
-a-days, social media and online shopping have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
the club and has become source of advertisement.

The main
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idea
of advertisement is to give choice to the
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people
and
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only
selecting the
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product
which meets the requirement if they fall within the consumer's range. It is
mostly
helpful to
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people
in remote and rural areas who have minimum exposure to any of the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
launch and online shopping is going to be of great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

Along with advantages, we do have disadvantages as
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people
will
be encouraged
to
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buy
a
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products
which aren't required.
Also
,
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some
buyers may
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get
attracted to the
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product
if it has
been marketed
by their favorite celebrity and may spend even it is beyond their reach.

As I
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see
more advantages than disadvantages, I
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think
advertising is a boon to buyers and sellers as long as it
is controlled
and maintained
properly
.
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IELTS essay Advertising has become a medium through which one can market their product, make more business and reach out to people.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
275 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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