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It is better to study abroad to improve foreign language skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is better to study abroad to improve foreign language skills. 85O0B
Nowadays, foreign Universities are placing the Top Rank to teach students professionally. It is quite easy to learn another language by studying in that country. There are several points to study abroad and learn language extremely well. First and foremost if people around us speak something, we learn it easily by hearing. And this atmosphere demands us to speak that language. For instance, my coursmate who studied English in Uzbekistan tried to learn grammar in order to go abroad and work. He learnt only grammar except speaking. Anyway he went to the USA and after three months we talked in the videocall, he was speaking such fluently. Second, there are many professors who wrote plenty of linguistic books. We can freshly get them and learn new things. Oherwise, these books will go through the world in two or three years time if we are aware of every single unit in the language developmemt. Third, by studying abroad we shall experience a brand-new country with incredible new outlooks, cultures and activities. New people from different countries have unusual accents when they are speaking. By understanding their language accents we can self develop our pronounciation. In conclusion, I strongly agree to study in the foreign country to learn and improve language skills, it will hugely impact our knowledge effectively for learing and also teaching.
Nowadays, foreign Universities are placing the Top Rank to teach students
professionally
. It is quite easy to
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learn
another
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language
by studying in that country.

There are several points to study abroad and
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learn
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language
extremely
well.
First
and foremost if
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people
around us speak something, we
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learn
it
easily
by hearing. And this atmosphere demands us to speak that
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language
.
For instance
, my
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coursmate
who studied English in Uzbekistan tried to
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learn
grammar in order to go abroad and work. He
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learnt
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only
grammar except speaking. Anyway he went to the USA and after three months we talked in the
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videocall
, he was speaking such
fluently
.

Second, there are
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many
professors who wrote
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plenty
of linguistic books. We can
freshly
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get
them and
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learn
new things.
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Oherwise
, these books will go through the world in two or three years time if we are aware of every single unit in the
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language
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developmemt
.

Third, by studying abroad we shall experience a brand-new country with incredible new outlooks, cultures and activities. New
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people
from
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different
countries have unusual accents when they are speaking. By understanding their
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language
accents we can self develop our
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pronounciation
.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
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agree
to study in the foreign country to
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learn
and
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improve
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language
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skills
, it will
hugely
impact our knowledge
effectively
for
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learing
and
also
teaching.
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IELTS essay It is better to study abroad to improve foreign language skills.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
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