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Talk about a voluntary organization VietNam or in the world

Talk about a voluntary organization VietNam or in the world pRpDw

I would like to talk about my experience of volunteering when I spent time working at a charity, which is named " NGO". Working in this organization, I have the chance to access different situation of young people here. When I discovered this opportunity, I was as happy as a clam because this is one of the most things that I always hope to do. During experience in 2 days, I helped them to cut down the tree, painted the wall or play the game with kids. Moreover, we also organize a small orchestra to donate all the money we earned for this charity. To be honest, this experience was made me so happy for a part of it and it gave me a lot of lessons to respect my life more. additionally, it not only gain experience in a particular professional field but also in order to give back something positive to the community. Donating your time and energy as a volunteer is great for the particular project

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