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It is better to have one or two close friends than to have a large number of casual acquaintences.

It is better to have one or two close friends than to have a large number of casual acquaintences. VB0XA
Just imagine the world without friends, it’s horrible, right? “Friend forever”. We can’t just live without friends. In my point of view it is better to have one or two close friends than more casual friends. I have several reasons to support my view. First of all, to know each other very well, there should be closeness between them. Being close means know each other like their interests, characters, feelings and the things like which makes them happy and unhappy. So they have good understanding between them, this helps to share problems. However, if we have many friends also, we ca. . .
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IELTS essay It is better to have one or two close friends than to have a large number of casual acquaintences.

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103 words
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