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it is better for teenagers to visit somewhere in the countryside than somewhere in a city

it is better for teenagers to visit somewhere in the countryside than somewhere in a city kLVGM

Nowadays, most people share the view that places in cities are more interesting for teenagers than places in the countryside. To begin with, the countryside have many advantajes such as the fasinating views ant the variety of nature, however, ithas disadvantajes too, especially the facilities of transport and shops and supermarkets far from the town. On the other hand we have cities, an accessible place to visit, it has a lot of facilities and a range of interesting places to visit, nevertheless it has disadvantajes, one examples is that the prices are higher than in the countryside, moreover, urban places have a lot of traffic so it is very difficult to arrive to a place at time. In conclusion both of them are fantastic ideas to consider, but in my opinion for a group of teenagers it could be better to choose the city for all the facilities that have and the original places that they can visit

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