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‘It is believed that technology has made man more sociable.’ Do you agree with this opinion?

‘It is believed that technology has made man more sociable. ’ Do you agree with this opinion? GL6px

Technology can be described as science or knowledge that is put to practical use in order to solve issues or produce useful tools for a specific purpose. Computers and smartphones are examples of technology that was developed to make communication more convenient. When sophisticated modern technology, such as computers and smartphones, first appeared, hundreds of disputes erupted about whether or not it had contributed to the enhancement and improvement of people's social interactions. But there is no proven answer for it. Thus, some people claim that technology has made man more sociable, but in this modernised world, it is critical to remember that man's sociability derives from a variety of factors and sociability is just part of it. . Personally, I agree that both sides have their pros and cons; as a result, both points of view will be discussed in this essay.

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