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Life is important than love

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When you realize who you
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live
for and who’s
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important
to
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please
,
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a lot of
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people
will actually
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start
living. I am never going to
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get
caught up in that. I’m gonna look back on my life and say that I enjoyed it and I
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lived
it for me.

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-
Have you ever felt that you made
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a lot of
work
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but
no one
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saw
it? Have you ever felt like you wanted to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
off the
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beautiful
photos or videos you created to the world? If you've ever felt this way, the
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application
I'm going to review
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
will solve all of these problems for you. Instagram is a free, online photo-sharing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
and social network platform with a wide range of users from all over the world. Instagram has various contents. You can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
the content that you dream of in less than 1 second. Whether you want to paint, cook, craft, or repair your refrigerator. You can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
them with Instagram. Instagram is
also
a platform where you can post your artworks or products
as well
. With Instagram's community system, you can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
your target audience by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
adding #.
In addition
to selling products, you can
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
with similar interests to you. And one of the features of Instagram that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
is the coolest and most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
from the others is the story system that can upload photos or short video clips. And it disappears within 24 hours. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
my friends or my favorite celebrities upload their stories, I feel like I'm spending my life with them too. It made me feel close to them
even though
we weren't together.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
-
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
thing I'm not impressed with Instagram is the advertising that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
up between the feed or story.
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Sometimes
, I feel it a
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little
annoying.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
Instagram could
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improve
the frequency of these ads that would be great.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.
-
Overall
, Instagram is an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who looking for a wide variety of content. Whether it's knowledge, entertainment or community for posting or trading, the artwork
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
not
be missed
. I recommend that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
download this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
application
to your device. And I guarantee that you will not
be disappointed
.
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IELTS essay Life is important than love

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
372 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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