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Write a narrative paragraph beginning with this topic sentence: “I wanted to leave the city as soon as possible.”

Write a narrative paragraph beginning with this topic sentence: “I wanted to leave the city as soon as possible. ” 7P2x6

I wanted to leave a city as soon as possible I grew up this city but i don’t love it. Basically, develop in here is quite slow, what is more depressing is relatively low wages I knew it beacuse when I was in high school, I worked part-time serving coffee but the salary was quite low and sometimes even lowered even though I worked full time. Environment be severally polluted. The deep blue trees were replaced with high-rise buldings. Especially, In the rainy season it is easy to flood there but the foods are deliciou. But I want to go back there for reason in here there are my friends, family, kind neighbors. So, I want to go to university to find a opportunity for myself.

I wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 a city as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible I grew up this city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it. Basically
, develop in here is quite slow, what is more
 depressing is relatively
 low wages I knew it Possible spelling mistake found.because
beacuse
 when I was in high school, I worked part-time serving coffee This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the salary was quite low and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 even lowered even though
 I worked full time. Environment be severally
 polluted. The deep blue trees were replaced
 with high-rise Possible spelling mistake found.buildingsbuddings
buldings
. Especially
, In the rainy season it is easy to flood there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the foods are Possible spelling mistake found.deliciousDelicious
deliciou
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I want to go back there for reason in here there are my friends, family, kind neighbors. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I want to go to university to find Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 opportunity for myself. 