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It is assert that in present time, youth has become impolite and less respectful as compared to past time. Reasons and solutions

It is assert that in present time, youth has become impolite and less respectful as compared to past time. Reasons and solutions WynEW

It is assert that in present time, youth has become impolite and less respectful as compared to past time. This essay will intend to examine the reasons behind it as well as some measures in upcoming paragraphs. At the outset, various causes are responsible behind it. The first causative factor is that parents have become workaholic therefore they have no spare time for spending with their children due to which young children has deprived from moral values. Resultantly, youth has become more aggressive today, who are not give respect to their elders and parents as well. A survey conducted by Punjabi university which revealed that the number of the children was 10%more who were impolite than previous year. It would say not be wrong that due to careless of the parents younger blood has becoming mannerless. What is more, technology is another factor which cannot be ignored. Most of time children spend to play video games that is why they don't like to interact with their neibours ND peers. Thus, they always feel irritation when someone try to talk with them ND they do misbehaviour. A article was published in Washington which revealed that 20% children have addricted of the technology due to which they prefer to live isolation. As a result they are less polite. On the other hand, although there are a lot of reasons behind this problem but some possible steps can be taken by parents to reduce this. Mother and father should spend more time with their offspring and tells to them values of respectful behavior and patience. Along with this they ought to check what their child on Mobile phone. To conclude, even though, many causes like busy schedule of parents and technology is responsible for this menace but it can be tackled by managing time table for children and both parents have to find time to spend with their juveniles.

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assert
 that in present You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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, youth has become impolite and less respectful as compared to past You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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. This essay will intend to examine the reasons behind it as well
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some
 measures in upcoming paragraphs.

At the outset, various causes are responsible behind it. The first
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parents
 have become workaholic therefore
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time
 for spending with their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
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children
 has The usual collocation for "deprived" is "of" not "". Did you mean "deprived of"?deprived of
deprived from
 moral values. Resultantly
, youth has become more aggressive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, who are not give respect to their elders and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
as well
. A survey conducted by Punjabi university which revealed that the number of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 was 10%more who were Use "impoliter" to make a comparison with this adjective.impoliter
impolite
 than previous year. It would say not be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 that due to careless of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 younger blood has becoming Possible spelling mistake found.manner less
mannerless
.

What is more
, technology is another factor which cannot be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglected
ignored
. Most of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
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children
 spend to play video games that is
 why they don't like to interact with their Possible spelling mistake found.laborsnabobstabors
neibours
 ND peers. Thus
, they always feel irritation when someone The pronoun 'someone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "tries", "tried".triestried
try
 to talk with them ND they do Possible spelling mistake. 'misbehaviour' is British English.misbehavior
misbehaviour
. Use "An" instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'An
A
 article was published
 in Washington which revealed that 20% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 have Possible spelling mistake found.addicted
addricted
 of the technology due to which they prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 isolation. As a result
 they are less polite.

On the other hand
, although there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 reasons behind this problem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 possible steps can be taken
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 this. Mother and father should spend more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with their offspring and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informs
tells
The verb 'to tell someone' does not require a preposition.them
to them
 values of respectful behavior and patience. Along with this they ought to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 what their child on Mobile phone.

To conclude
, even though
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 causes like busy schedule of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 and technology is responsible for this menace This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it can be tackled
 by managing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 table for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 and both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 find You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 to spend with their juveniles. 