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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is always better to study with a teacher than it is to study alone.” Support your response with reasons and examples.

: “It is always better to study with a teacher than it is to study alone. ” Support your response with reasons and examples. Kljgw
Most of the students in our country wrongly believe that they can study their lessons lonely while they can see the weak results of doing it among their friends, family, and etc. There is obviously no point of doing such a thing like that and studying alone will have no results except regression. In the other hand, if a student studies with a teacher, they will be able to study faster, have your mistakes corrected, and of course the teacher will put them under pressure to study and they will not have anyway to escape of it. First, I let’s discuss about the speed of studying in each case. When the person gets their teacher taught lessons to them, they don’t have to deal with the textbook which is usually complicated to understand and memorize. They can get to know the points of the lesson faster so that they will have more time to rest or do the tasks they want. I remember the year before the ‘Konkur’ exam which the students in Iran have to take it to get accepted from university. I had been studying for about 3 months when I recognized that my speed of studying is too low to reach my goals I had set. Second, the students have no reasons whether they have known the textbook correctly when they are studying by theirselves, but if they have their teacher taught them, they will be sure that they have known the stuff written in the textbook correctly and they will not be doubtful about it. Once one of my friends had studied by himself for the exam and he couldn’t even get the half of maximum score of it although he thought he was going to get the full mark. That was because of his misunderstanding while he was studying lonely some days before exam. Finally, being under pressure from the teacher to study will help too much to the student to make progress, study on time, and not postpone their tasks. Some people don’t really study when they don’t have a teacher and they won’t spend even a minute studying when they don’t have someone to enforce them study. Lazy students are obvious example of this condition. How will they study without a teacher? Totally the benefits of studying with a teacher is much more than studying alone and in my idea studying lonely is just a waste of time.
Most of the
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students
in our country
wrongly
believe that they can
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study
their lessons lonely while they can
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see
the weak results of doing it among their friends, family,
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and etc
. There is
obviously
no point of doing such a thing like that and
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studying
alone will have no results except regression. In the other hand, if a
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student
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studies
with a
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teacher
, they will be able to
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study
faster, have your mistakes corrected, and
of course
the
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teacher
will put them under pressure to
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study and
they will not have anyway to escape of it.

First
, I
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’s
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discuss about the
speed of
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studying
in each case. When the person
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gets
their
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teacher
taught lessons to them, they don’t
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have to
deal with the textbook which is
usually
complicated to understand and memorize. They can
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get
to know the points of the lesson faster
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so
that they will have more time to rest or do the tasks they want. I remember the year
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before
the ‘
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Konkur
’ exam which the
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students
in Iran
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have to
take it to
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get
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accepted
from university. I had been
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studying
for about 3 months when I recognized that my speed of
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studying
is too low to reach my goals I had set.

Second, the
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students
have no reasons whether they have known the textbook
correctly
when they are
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studying
by
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theirselves
,
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but
if they have their
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teacher
taught them, they will be sure that they have known the stuff written in the textbook
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correctly and
they will not be doubtful about it. Once one of my friends had studied by himself for the
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exam and
he couldn’t even
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get
the half of maximum score of it although he
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thought
he was going to
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get
the full mark. That was
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because
of his misunderstanding while he was
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studying
lonely
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some
days
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before
exam.

Finally
, being under pressure from the
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teacher
to
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study
will
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help
too much to the
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to
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make
progress,
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study
on time, and not postpone their tasks.
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Some
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people
don’t
really
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study
when they don’t have a
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teacher and
they won’t spend even a minute
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studying
when they don’t have someone to enforce them
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study
. Lazy
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students
are obvious example of this condition. How will they
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study
without a
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teacher
?
Totally
the benefits of
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studying
with a
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teacher
is much more than
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studying
alone and in my
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idea
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studying
lonely is
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a waste of time.

IELTS essay : “It is always better to study with a teacher than it is to study alone. ” Support your response with reasons and examples.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
405 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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