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It has been frequently mentioned that nations are increasingly being the exact of one another due to the availability of consumable goods to customers across the globe, which on my opinion I believe it is a positive development.

It has been frequently mentioned that nations are increasingly being the exact of one another due to the availability of consumable goods to customers across the globe, which on my opinion I believe it is a positive development. x2Mlb
It has been frequently mentioned that nations are increasingly being the exact of one another due to the availability of consumable goods to customers across the globe, which on my opinion I believe it is a positive development. First of all nowadays people are extremely busy with their lives and no one would want to waste time looking for a product to see its availability in the country where the person lives. Thanks to products are being available almost anywhere in the world, As result people will be able to purchase anything they want, whenever they want from anywhere in the world which consumers find very convenient for them. For an example, people will not be able to use new technology such as smartphones if those products were limited to one specific nation, which consequences in making day-to-day work more harder than it currently is for most busy people. Secondly, for the manufacturers to who probably own large Proportions of labour and resources does not need to worry about losing customers due to having their factory based in a different location where most of the companies customers are not residing in, because a product is available to their customers regardless of their actual geo location, resulting in being able to selling the goods to different consumers in different countries. For an instance a lot of giant car manufacturers still able to sell their manufactured vehicles to countries that does not included with any type of vehicle manufacturing industry nor that people could get their hands onto buy a vehicle for their daily use. If the products were only available to the country that they are made in, it will be very hard to keep up with their manufacturing of vehicles. Especially when regarding to luxury business vehicles as appropriate for consumers who own businesses. With that being said this type of development falls more into a positive side than onto a negative To conclude, I am convinced that being able to buy a product or its availability to the customers across the globe is a positive development as it helps develop the country and as well as the people.
It has been
frequently
mentioned that nations are
increasingly
being
The phrase 'the exact of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the exact of
one another due to the availability of consumable
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goods
to
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customers
across the globe, which on my opinion I believe it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
development.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
nowadays
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people
are
extremely
busy with their
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lives
and no one would want to waste time looking for a
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product
to
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see
its availability in the
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country
where the person
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lives
. Thanks to
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products
are being available almost anywhere in the world, As result
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people
will be
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able
to
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purchase
anything they want, whenever they want from anywhere in the world which consumers find
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very
convenient for them. For an example,
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people
will not be
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able
to
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use
new technology such as smartphones if those
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products
were limited
to one specific nation, which consequences in making day-to-day work
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more harder
than it
currently
is for most busy
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people
.

Secondly
, for the manufacturers to who
probably
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own
large Proportions of
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labour
and resources does not need to worry about losing
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customers
due to having their factory based in a
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different
location where most of the
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companies
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customers
are not residing in,
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because
a
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product
is available to their
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customers
regardless of their actual
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geo
location, resulting in being
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able
to selling the
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goods
to
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different
consumers in
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different
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countries
. For an instance
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a lot of
giant car manufacturers
still
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able
to sell their manufactured
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vehicles
to
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countries
that does not
The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: "include"
included
with any type of
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vehicle
manufacturing industry nor that
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people
could
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get
their hands onto
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buy
a
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vehicle
for their daily
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use
. If the
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products
were
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only
available to the
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country
that they
are made
in, it will be
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very
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hard
to
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keep
up with their manufacturing of
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vehicles
.
Especially
when
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regarding to
luxury business
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vehicles
as appropriate for consumers who
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own
businesses. With that
being said
this type of development falls more into a
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positive
side than onto a
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negative


To conclude
, I
am convinced
that being
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able
to
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buy
a
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product
or its availability to the
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customers
across the globe is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
development as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
develop the
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country
and
as well
as the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.

IELTS essay It has been frequently mentioned that nations are increasingly being the exact of one another due to the availability of consumable goods to customers across the globe, which on my opinion I believe it is a positive development.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
359 words
5.0
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