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It has been argued that students have created a safer world and prevented another diseases. Is the world really a safer place because of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been argued that students have created a safer world and prevented another diseases. Is the world really a safer place because of them. VBymJ

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hard
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weapons
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destroyed
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lives
 and have caused severe damage to our environment, Which is caused
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but
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now
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affected
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Hammering the last nail, I am of After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'Opine' is correct. If 'Opine' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the Opine
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used
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used
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so
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