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It has been argued that nuclear weapons have created ac forward and prevented another world war is the world really a safe place because of them to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has been argued that nuclear weapons have created ac forward and prevented another world war is the world really a safe place because of them with this opinion DVldp
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creates a for
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wars. A completely
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agree
with this statement this essay will discuss the way in which nuclear
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creates safer world.

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begin
with, nuclear
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world
. It has numerous benefits for individuals.
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renewable. It can be
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cheap
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saves
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a lot of
money on oil that the prices of the oil is increasing day by day. If
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people
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use
nuclear
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rather
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people
consume less transportation due to the fact of the light diminishing of
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fossil
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fuels
consequently
, if
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people
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use
nuclear
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that saved
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for upcoming generation
also
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save
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can
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oil, petroleum at extreme need.

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further
, there are
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many
things which cannot
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by nuclear
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weapons
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none the less
due to the
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of
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in
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Mein
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people
will face due to lack of another useful sources nuclear
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do not produce a mission which might
be released
from cars Industries where gases and
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use
nuclear
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weapons
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Save
environment from pollution in various ways.

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all of the
above that nuclear
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weapons
are
extremely
helpful for mankind
as well
as for
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world
it
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saves
environment from pollution
as well
as
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help
to
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prevent
diminishing of
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sources.
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IELTS essay It has been argued that nuclear weapons have created ac forward and prevented another world war is the world really a safe place because of them with this opinion

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