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Due to the use of computers and mobile phones, letter writing is disappearing. To what extent do you agree it disagree?

Due to the use of computers and mobile phones, letter writing is disappearing. gx5OD
In contemporary society, because of usage of electronic devices and new inventions, the computers and mobile phones are one of the best and successful machines of innovations that humans can perform more than one action simultaneously with less time. There is a view that supports the point that officialdom in every working place and chatting with our relatives or friends in paper form have been common for a long time. On the contrary, in my personal opinion today's communication with each other is much more convenient to keep in touch than writing a letter as before. To begin with, assumption that bureaucracy in companies and talking to each other with letter writing have been normal for a long time is based on some grounds. Basically, due to the businessmen's concern over security, paper letters are used for important business exchange such as the signing of the business contracts. This may lead to wasting too much expense or spending their precious time. Furthermore, we used to contact each other by traditional writing before inventing new devices such as cell phones or computers. Nevertheless, people who are on the side of the opinion that since new technologies have been created, the traditional letter writing is about to vanish possess more valid justifications. The principle point is that after creation of new inventions, many things such as studying abroud, contacting with the help of internet become easier. To summarize, I strongly agree with the notion that letter writing ability is becoming extinct in account of modern technology and use of communication equipment such as mobile phone, laptop and also video calls every time everywhere and people do not want to use traditional ways for their relationships.
In contemporary society,
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of usage of electronic devices and
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new
inventions, the computers and mobile phones are one of the best and successful machines of innovations that humans can perform more than one action
simultaneously
with less
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time
. There is a view that supports the point that officialdom in every working place and chatting with our relatives or friends in paper form have been common for a long
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time
.
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keep
in touch than
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writing
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letter
as
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before
. To
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begin
with, assumption that bureaucracy in
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companies
and talking to each other with
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letter
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writing
have been normal for a long
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time
is based
on
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some
grounds.
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, due to the businessmen's concern over security, paper
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letters
are
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used
for
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important
business exchange such as the signing of the business contracts. This may lead to wasting too much expense or spending their precious
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time
.
Furthermore
, we
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used
to contact each other by traditional
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writing
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before
inventing
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new
devices such as cell phones or computers.
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,
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people
who are on the side of the opinion that since
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new
technologies have
been created
, the traditional
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letter
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writing
is about to vanish possess more valid justifications. The principle point is that after creation of
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new
inventions,
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many
things such as studying
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abroud
, contacting with the
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help
of internet become easier.
To summarize
, I
strongly
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agree
with the notion that
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letter
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writing
ability is becoming extinct in account of modern technology and
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use
of communication equipment such as mobile phone, laptop and
also
video calls every
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time
everywhere and
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people
do not want to
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use
traditional ways for their relationships.
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IELTS essay Due to the use of computers and mobile phones, letter writing is disappearing.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
283 words
6.0
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