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Government should be responsible to protaction of enviroment. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Government should be responsible to protaction of enviroment. 6pdEr
Saving enviroment became the main issue of the human live. I beleive that government should spend their power to devoloping economy of country and each people responsible protection of enviroment. Government only should not responsible to protacting nature and they ought to look to other issue of country. Since, the financial force of government may spend odd to nature problems and economy of country increased slowly. In addition, instead of protection of nature, others( exporting, marketing, producing) should be grown. For example, of the Europan countries, in italy people clean different places ( school, market and social buildings) exception edge of highway. Currently, keeping the natural world should be belong who are living there. As each people live different places and these areas are polluted and saved by humans. The stuations should not be responsible, since, people can do it together. In uzbekistan national labor day is organized by uzbek citizens every 21 august. In addition, this day has been celebrated since ancient times and all the people of city take an active part in it.
Saving
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enviroment
became the main issue of the human
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live
. I
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beleive
that
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government
should spend their power to
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devoloping
economy of
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country
and each
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people
responsible protection of
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enviroment
.

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Government
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only
should not responsible to
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protacting
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nature and
they ought to look to other issue of
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country
. Since, the financial force of
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government
may spend odd to nature problems and economy of
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country
increased
slowly
.
In addition
,
instead
of protection of nature, others
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(
exporting, marketing, producing) should
be grown
.
For example
, of the
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Europan
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countries
, in
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italy
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people
clean
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different
places
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(
school, market and social buildings) exception edge of highway.

Currently
, keeping the natural world should be
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belong
who are living there. As each
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people
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live
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different
places and these areas
are polluted
and saved by humans. The
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stuations
should not be responsible, since,
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people
can do it together. In
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uzbekistan
national
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labor day
is organized
by
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uzbek
citizens every 21 august.
In addition
, this day has
been celebrated
since ancient times and all the
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people
of city take an active part in it.
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IELTS essay Government should be responsible to protaction of enviroment.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
176 words
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