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IT appears that the country’s wheat troubles are far from over

IT appears that the country’s wheat troubles are far from over VBwkK
The demand for wheat flour as a major staple is inelastic. This means that a hike, no matter how large it may be, does not reduce its consumption, or at least does not effect too much of a change in eating routines. In fact, people will cut expenditure on other items to pay for flour. Little wonder then that it is easier for wheat stockists and flour millers to raise their prices without loss in sales in times of both real and artificial scarcity — even at the risk of causing unrest among the people, especially the poor who spend more than half their monthly income on food. The usual suspects include corporate greed and/or blunders by the government that allowed the export of wheat and wheat flour between August and October despite a ban imposed on July 30. It is hard to blame a for-profit business for exploiting an opportunity. But governments are expected to regulate the markets in a way that minimises the chances of anyone fleecing the people. In a country where more than a third of the population lives under the poverty line, it is painful to imagine how the vast majority is coping with rising food prices rooted in rampant market greed and poor governance
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as a major staple is inelastic. This means that a hike, no matter how large it may be, does not
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reduce
its consumption, or at least does not
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too much of a
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change
in eating routines. In fact,
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people
will
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expenditure on other items to pay for
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flour
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wonder then that it is easier for
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wheat
stockists and
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flour
millers to raise their prices without loss in sales in times of both real and artificial scarcity — even at the
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risk
of causing unrest among the
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people
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the poor who spend more than half their monthly income on food.

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government
that
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allowed
the export of
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wheat
and
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wheat
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flour
between August and October despite a ban imposed on July 30. It is
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hard
to blame a for-profit business for exploiting an opportunity.
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governments
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to regulate the markets in a way that
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the chances of anyone fleecing the
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people
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In a country where more than a third of the population
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lives
under the poverty line, it is painful to imagine how the vast majority is coping with rising food prices rooted in rampant market greed and poor governance
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IELTS essay IT appears that the country’s wheat troubles are far from over

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
209 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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