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is technology taking over the world do you agree or disagree give reasons and discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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This essay that there is ample evidence that the technology become a vital and essential thing on day-to day in he world. The technology makes the world function more efficiently. Furthermore, changed the way we live which is now easier to communicate with people through internet on social media as a popular one in the world is a Facebook. As well as, technology has made shopping quicker and easier and allows more business to create their shops online rather than at shopping centres. Also, the technology has a positive impact during with their doctor. Notably, in education sector the technology online on webinar.
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through internet on social media as a popular one in the world is a Facebook.
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technology
has made shopping quicker and easier and
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allows
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has a
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positive
impact during with their doctor.
Notably
, in education sector the
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online on webinar.
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IELTS essay is technology taking over the world give reasons and discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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