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Is spending leisure time with Work Colleagues good or bad?

Is spending leisure time with Work Colleagues good or bad? ELO1B
In an ideal world, work colleagues should get along. Some companies often organize events on holidays and other occasions. Purpose of this exercise is to create harmony between staff members and boost their work productivity. This might work but often times it does not. It is perceived as company time rather than leisure time. Different people spend their leisure time with family or work colleagues depending on their circumstances. A single individual, living alone, might find it convenient to mingle with work colleagues and go out to a bar or on a picnic on a day off. This might help boost the work environment and help understand eachother. On the other hand, some people might want to spend their leisure time with family. There is no better opportunity for bonding with family than spending time together. Spending time with work colleagues can sometimes affect family life. In conclusion, striking the perfect balance would be the key. In my personal experience, introducing work colleagues to family members has worked like a charm. Throwing parties, planning day outs, and excursions have let our spouses and children come close. Now we can go out and spend time with both my family and work colleagues.
In an ideal world,
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on holidays and other occasions. Purpose of this exercise is to create harmony between staff members and boost their
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productivity. This
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but
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it does not. It
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company
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rather
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spend their leisure
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time
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depending on their circumstances. A single individual, living alone,
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might
find it convenient to mingle with
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work
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colleagues
and go out to a bar or on a picnic on a day off. This
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help
boost the
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environment and
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. There is no better opportunity for bonding with
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than spending
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together. Spending
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affect
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life.
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, striking the perfect balance would be the key. In my personal experience, introducing
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work
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colleagues
to
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family
members has worked like a charm. Throwing parties, planning day outs, and excursions have
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let
our spouses and children
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come
close.
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Now
we can go out and spend
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time
with both my
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family
and
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IELTS essay Is spending leisure time with Work Colleagues good or bad?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
201 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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