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Is smoking in public places good?

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Smoking is an addiction caused by cigarettes, vaping, or cigars. Nicotine, a highly addictive sedative found in most smoking devices. Smoking can ruin many lives especially the people who have never inhaled nicotine. Smoking is not only addicting but also worse on the organs of the body. The substances can block airways or blood flow from entering vital body parts and stopping them to function properly. Although smoking used to be advertised as safe to the general public, it has garnered a reputation for being the world's most addicting drug. Smoking in public places is another problem because this affects the people surrounding the smoker. It can affect people with a weak immune system such as babies, older people, people with asthma, and more. During the old times, smoking was allowed in public because it was advertised as healthy. Now, smoking in public places such as malls, apartments, and more can get you a very expensive fine. Even though cigars and vapes are given to adults, it is still a growing problem especially for countries that have a lot of smokers such as Indonesia. Indonesia is known for having kids smoke at a young age and making people perceive that smoking is healthy and important for their health. two out of three people smoke in Indonesia and it causes a problem for tourists and non-smokers. Many places offer smoking rooms that lessen the risk of any secondhand smoke illness or disease. It is a good solution that both give advantages to the people and the smokers. Although this seems like a permanent solution, we must not encourage more people to smoke even if there are rooms to smoke. Smoking can still ruin lives and the person's health in general. By taxing cigarettes and continuously showing the bad effects of smoking. The number of smokers will decline and therefore, have a much healthier community. This makes the air cleaner and more people will not have the risk of any organ failure or anything that can ruin their life.
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Smoking
is an addiction caused by cigarettes, vaping, or cigars. Nicotine, a
highly
addictive sedative found in most
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smoking
devices.
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Smoking
can ruin
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many
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lives
especially
the
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people
who have never inhaled nicotine.
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Smoking
is not
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only
addicting
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but
also
worse on the organs of the body. The substances can block airways or blood flow from entering vital body parts and stopping them to function
properly
. Although
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smoking
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used
to
be advertised
as safe to the general
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public
, it has garnered a reputation for being the world's most
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addicting
drug.

Smoking in
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public
places is another problem
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because
this affects the
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people
surrounding the smoker. It can affect
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people
with a weak immune system such as babies, older
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people
,
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people
with asthma, and more. During the
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old
times,
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smoking
was
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allowed
in
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public
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because
it
was advertised
as healthy.
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Now
,
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smoking
in
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public
places such as malls, apartments, and more can
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get
you a
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very
expensive fine.

Even though
cigars and vapes are
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given
to adults, it is
still
a growing problem
especially
for countries that have
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a lot of
smokers such as Indonesia. Indonesia
is known
for having kids
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smoke
at a young age and making
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people
perceive that
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smoking
is healthy and
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important
for their health.
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two
out of three
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people
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smoke
in Indonesia and it causes a problem for tourists and non-smokers.

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Many
places offer
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smoking
rooms that lessen the
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risk
of any secondhand
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smoke
illness or disease. It is a
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good
solution that both give advantages to the
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people
and the smokers. Although this seems like a permanent solution, we
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must
not encourage more
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people
to
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smoke
even if there are rooms to
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smoke
.
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Smoking
can
still
ruin
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lives
and the person's health
in general
.

By taxing cigarettes and
continuously
showing the
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bad
effects of
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smoking
. The number of smokers will decline and
therefore
, have a much healthier community. This
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makes
the air cleaner and more
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people
will not have the
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risk
of any organ failure or anything that can ruin their life.
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IELTS essay Is smoking in public places good?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
337 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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