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a piece of furniture that you own

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Good morning my name is abdul rahman today i am going to speak on the topic a piece of furniture that you own. the furniture that i own is a computer desk. i bought it from the near by furniture store. mostly i do not buy any furniture because my dad is the one who buy these things. i bought this desk because i do not have one. i use it for study purpose and also for using my computer. i like this furniture because it matches perfectly with the other pieces of furniture in my room. it also have enough space to akomodate other thing, not only mu computer. finally, i like it because it looks good and can be set in any coner of my room.
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morning my name is
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abdul
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rahman
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today
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am going to speak on the topic a piece of
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furniture
that you
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own
.
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the
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furniture
that
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i
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own
is a computer desk.
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i
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bought
it from the
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near by
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furniture
store.
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mostly
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i
do not
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buy
any
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furniture
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because
my dad is the one who
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buy
these things.
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i
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bought
this desk
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because
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i
do not have one.
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i
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use
it for study purpose and
also
for using my computer.
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i
like this
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furniture
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because
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perfectly
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furniture
in my room.
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it
also
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have
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enough
space to
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akomodate
other thing, not
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only
mu computer.
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finally
,
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i
like it
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because
it looks
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good
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coner
of my room.
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IELTS essay a piece of furniture that you own

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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