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is public transport better than railways

is public transport better than railways D6mwo
A numerous number of people from different countries believe that it is absolutely necessary to increase funds on railway lines, which results in fast travel between cities. However, few people argue that public transport should be improved by spending more money. This essay will highlight both the perceptions as well as my point of view will be elaborated. To begin with, It is crucial for people to travel for various reasons, and by using railways an immense amount of time is saved in commute. Many people believe that authorities should spend a drastic amount of money in constructing new railways as it is an easier way of travel and also improves the growth of the nation. In other words, If new railway lines are built this would result in a smoother way of travel from one place to another, as it is way cheaper and causing the country to increase its globalization rates. For instance, People in japan prefer railways of the fact that they believe it is efficient. Moreover, it is evident that a huge number of goods and supplies can be transported with the help of railways. Therefore causing a positive increase in globalization. On the other hand, In some countries, few residents think that the expenditure on public transport should be improved. It is evident that not all travel can be done with private transport systems. So, this makes people rely on public transport. By improving public transport such as Bus, and metro, would result in traffic reduction as well as cuts the expenses by a drastic amount. For instance, Still many people in India depend on public transport as it is more reliable and can travel to many cities or nearby places with very little money spent. To summarize, Both means of transport are necessary to travel from one place to another. While, some think money should be spent on new railway lines, others suggest funds should be provided to improve public transport. In my opinion, i believe that both the ways of travel as significantly important, as this would in turn result in an economic growth of the the nation, and also reduces the expenses of travel for the public.
A numerous number of
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people
from
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countries

believe that it is
absolutely
necessary to increase funds on
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railway
lines, which results in
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fast
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travel
between cities.
However
, few
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people
argue that
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public
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transport
should be
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improved
by spending more money. This essay will highlight both the perceptions
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as well as
my point of view will
be elaborated
.

To
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begin
with, It is crucial for
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people
to
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travel
for various reasons, and by using
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railways
an immense

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amount
of time
is saved
in commute.
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Many
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people
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believe


that authorities should spend a drastic amount of money

in constructing new
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railways
as it is an easier way

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of
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travel
and
also
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improves
the growth of the nation.

In other words
, If new
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railway
lines
are built
this would result in a smoother way of
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travel
from one place to another, as it is way cheaper and causing the country to increase its globalization rates.
For instance
,
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People
in japan prefer
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railways
of the fact that they believe it is efficient.
Moreover
, it is evident that a huge number of
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goods
and supplies can
be transported
with the
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help
of
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railways
.
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Therefore
causing a
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positive
increase in globalization.

On the other hand
, In
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some
countries, few residents
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think
that the expenditure on
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public
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transport
should be
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improved
. It is evident that not all
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travel
can
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be


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done
with private
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transport
systems.
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So
, this
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makes
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people
rely on
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public
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transport
. By
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improving


public
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transport
such as Bus, and metro, would

result in traffic reduction
as well
as
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cuts
the

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expenses
by a drastic amount.
For instance
,
Still
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many


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people
in India depend on
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public
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transport
as it is

more reliable and can
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travel
to
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many
cities or nearby

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places
with
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very
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little
money spent.

To summarize
, Both means of
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transport
are necessary

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to
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travel
from one place to another. While,
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some
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think


money should
be spent
on new
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railway
lines, others

suggest funds should
be provided
to
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improve


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public
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transport
. In my opinion,
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i
believe
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that


both the ways of
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travel
as
significantly
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important
,

as this would in turn result in an economic growth of
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the the
nation, and
also
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reduces
the expenses of travel

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for
the
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public
.
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IELTS essay is public transport better than railways

Essay
  American English
23 paragraphs
365 words
5.5
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