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I'm currently living in Batam. It's my hometown actually, i was borned and raised there. I acctually have been living there my whole life. I think that i did move to Tangerang Selatan to study for almost 2, 5 years and then due to pandemic Covid-19, i have to come back to batam then i feel pretty fortunate to be living in Batam because i've got access to pretty a lot interesting place and modern design of city. So, it's very convenient to live there, particulary Batam has a well-known bridges that called Barelang bridges which connect three islands over there, those are Batam, Rempang, and Galang Yeah, you know, it's so near from my home, i love enjoying my weekend to visit it Over the years, such as at last ten years, there wew several changes about transportation and highways, i probably say that batam is an example for making a prepared concepts of modern city. So it's kind a nice to live in Batam
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currently
living in
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Batam
.
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It's
my hometown actually,
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i
was
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borned
and raised there.

I
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acctually
have been living there my whole life. I
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that
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did
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to
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Tangerang
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Selatan
to study for almost 2, 5 years and then due to pandemic Covid-19,
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i
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have to
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come
back to
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batam
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then


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i
feel pretty fortunate to be living in
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Batam
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because
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i've
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got
access to pretty a
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lot
interesting place and modern design of city.

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,
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very
convenient to
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live
there,
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particulary
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Batam
has a well-known
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bridges
that called
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Barelang
bridges which connect three islands over there, those are
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Batam
,
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Rempang
, and
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Galang


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near from my
home,
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i
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love
enjoying my weekend to visit it

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wew
several
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changes
about transportation and highways,
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i
probably
say that
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batam
is an example for making a prepared
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concepts
of modern city.
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it's
kind a nice to
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live
in
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Batam

IELTS essay describing about hometown

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
165 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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