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Family members asked for help

Family members asked for help Nmq32
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IELTS essay Family members asked for help

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
176 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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