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Agree or disagree, all human are beautiful

Agree or disagree, all human are beautiful p5ge9
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BHABI/MAMI JI! ! ! enjoy your day pretty lady may God Bless you, thank you for taking care of these little cutiesand being good with us may all your wishes this year and upcoming years come true and you shine as bright as a star also remain beautiful and precious because that really define your beauty, once again happy birthday! ! HAPPY BIRTHDAY BHABI/MAMI JI! ! ! enjoy your day pretty lady may God Bless you, thank you for taking care of these little cuties and being good with us may all your wishes this year and upcoming years come true and you shine as bright as a star also remain beautiful and precious because that really define your beauty, once again happy birthday! !
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BHABI
/
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MAMI
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JI
! ! !
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enjoy
your day pretty lady may God Bless you, thank you for taking care of these
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little
cuties and being
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good
with us may all your wishes this
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year
and upcoming years
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come
true and you shine as bright as a star
also
remain
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beautiful
and precious
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because
that
really
define your beauty, once again
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IELTS essay Agree or disagree, all human are beautiful

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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