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Is learning another language helpful at school?

Is learning another language helpful at school? jRXMa
According to my perspective, studying a foreign language at schools is supremely beneficial for students for two main reasons. First and foremost, the student gets to learn a new language which adds an additional life skill. Additionally, they will be able to survive or even have the opportunity to move to another country by knowing the language widely spoken there. In conclusion, picking up a new concept or a language at a young age is quite easy as well it is immensely beneficial during globalization.
According to my perspective, studying a foreign
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language
at schools is
supremely
beneficial for students for two main reasons.
First
and foremost, the student
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gets
to learn a new
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language
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adds an additional life
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skill
.
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, they will be able to survive or even have the opportunity to
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move
to another country by knowing the
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language
widely
spoken there.
In conclusion
, picking up a new concept or a
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language
at a young age is quite easy
as well
it is
immensely
beneficial during globalization.

IELTS essay Is learning another language helpful at school?

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