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Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?

Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree? pbXxd
It is undeniable that humans have severe effects on the environment. To deal with this problem, planting more trees is a feasible solution. First of all, trees are the chief factors to create oxygen for people. As a result, we can not live on this planet without trees. Especially, in these time, when people always believe that they are the most powerful species on the planet and they assume that cutting down trees is a normal thing to make money and live. This leads to the amount of trees is decreasing, which threatens to our life. During the history of humankind, human was relied totally on trees, which provide food, oxygen and even assisted us in having woods to build house, discovering fire and so on. Moreover, trees not only provide fresh air for people, but also contribute plenty of the landscapes on the planet. In detail, a various kinds of trees are existing all the corners of the world, they attribute more shapes and reduce the heat of the weather. Trees appears everywhere and they are the symbols of life. They make our livings have more colors such as green, red and orange colors of leaves and brown color of trunks, they are also the signs of each season. To sum up, on no account should people not plant trees on planet as trees are life. The more trees are planted, the more benefits for us.
It is undeniable that humans have severe effects on the environment. To deal with this problem, planting more
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trees
is a feasible solution.

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First of all
,
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trees
are the chief factors to create oxygen for
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people
.
As a result
, we can not
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live
on this
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planet
without
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trees
.
Especially
, in these time, when
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people
always believe that they are the most powerful species on the
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planet and
they assume that cutting down
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trees
is a normal thing to
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make
money and
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live
. This leads to the amount of
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trees
is decreasing, which threatens to our life. During the history of humankind, human
was relied
totally
on
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trees
, which provide food, oxygen and even assisted us in having woods to build
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house
, discovering fire and
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so
on.

Moreover
,
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trees
not
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only
provide fresh air for
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people
,
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but
also
contribute
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plenty
of the landscapes on the
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planet
. In detail, a various
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kinds
of
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trees
are existing all the corners of the world, they attribute more shapes and
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reduce
the heat of the weather.
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Trees appears
everywhere and they are the symbols of life. They
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make
our livings have more colors such as green, red and orange colors of
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leaves
and brown color of trunks, they are
also
the signs of each season.

To sum up, on no account should
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people
not plant
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trees
on
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planet
as
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trees
are life. The more
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trees
are planted
, the more benefits for us.
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IELTS essay Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
237 words
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