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Is it more important to earn a high salary than have an enjoyable job?

Is it more important to earn a high salary than have an enjoyable job? Xl5pO

Some people work hard every day to get a high salary, but their job does not always bring them joy. Other get lower salary, but they do what they like and enjoy. In my opinion, it is more important to have an enjoyable job than a well-paid one. People that work at their favourite job are much happier doing what they like even if they are paid little. Meanwhile, people that spend a lot of time doing something they hate and do not enjoy for money, have psychological and emotional problems. They have a lot of money, they can buy almost everything except for happiness. Happiness cannot be bought.

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