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image of a lanfill and its use and end with top of clay

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The image depicts the outline of stages of building a lanfill, its purpose of garbage disposal and its closure once it is filled up until the top. Overall, there are two steps in construction and it is used for containment of waste for a certain amount of time or until it gets full and is later sealed off with clay. Initially, a wide area is dug out above natural rock, its bottom is laid down with a drainage tank, which is further connected with draining tubes. The tubes communicate with the outside, and bring in the dump from each house. The main reason for laying out a landfill is to fill it with daily waste far away from the places people reside in. The hole is only slightly filled at the beginning and gets full overtime and the botton is spread with liquid waste and clay. As time prolongs, the waste decomposes and releases gases, which are not present at the beginning, which are now directed out through pipes. Any landfill can hold only certain amount of waste and after it reaches its maximum capacity, it is covered on top with clay and a new landfill is made elsewhere.
The image depicts the outline of stages of building a
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lanfill
, its purpose of garbage disposal and its closure once it
is filled
up until the top.

Overall
, there are two steps in construction and it is
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used
for containment of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
for a certain amount of time or until it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
full and is later sealed off with clay.

Initially
, a wide area
is dug
out above natural rock, its bottom
is laid
down with a drainage tank, which is
further
connected with draining tubes. The tubes communicate with the outside, and bring in the dump from each
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

The main reason for laying out a landfill is to fill it with daily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
far away from the places
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
reside in.
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The
hole is
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only
slightly
filled at the beginning and
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gets
full overtime and the
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botton
is spread
with liquid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
and clay. As time prolongs, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
decomposes and releases gases, which are not present at the beginning, which are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
directed out through pipes. Any landfill can hold
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
certain amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
and after it reaches its maximum capacity, it
is covered
on top with clay and a new landfill
is made
elsewhere.
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IELTS essay image of a lanfill and its use and end with top of clay

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
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