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Is it important that everyone in the society is treated in the same way? Why?/Why not? Write a 200-250 word essay. Discuss the questions above and give your view on how prejudice and discrimination might be overcome.

Is it important that everyone in the society is treated in the same way? Why? /Why not? Write a 200-250 word essay. Discuss the questions above and give your view on how prejudice and discrimination might be overcome. E37BR
​Nowadays people have different attitude to each other in the varied ways. Someone hates just for skin; one likes only own citizens and so on. Against the background of recent events in the USA, many people express thoughts about racism and other discrimination principles in a human society. This essay will discuss about disparity in our world. Personally, I believe that all people are different and the governments need to find the correct way for relevant group of people that they will be happy. ​First of all, the main reason is human inequality biologically. Some people can raise a 100 pounds rock, others – imagine and produce the well-known pictures. So, the evolution plays with humans and decides which characteristic is suited to person the best. That is why, people are not equal physically. In fact, Afro-American are faster and stronger than people of Eastern countries. ​Another reason comes from history. From ancient times, the white people managed Afro-American population and called them as labourers. In most cases, European countries was more developed than African, so people, who came from there needed to earn money (we can see it today); either European civilization captured a country and controlled their inhabitants. For example, there are a big number of African countries which called as colony and were managed by European countries such as France, Portugal, Spain etc. ​In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the government should pass correct laws that prevent discrimination people. Also, they need to analyse social groups and their behavior to understand people and propagate to respect each other.
​Nowadays
people
have
different
attitude to each
other
in the varied ways. Someone hates
just
for skin; one likes
only
own
citizens and
so
on. Against the background of recent
events
in the USA,
many
people
express thoughts about racism and
other
discrimination principles in a human society. This essay will
discuss about disparity
in our world.
Personally
, I believe that all
people
are
different
and the
governments
need to find the correct way for relevant group of
people
that they will be happy.

First of all
, the main reason is human inequality
biologically
.
Some
people
can raise a
100 pounds
rock, others
imagine and produce the well-known pictures.
So
, the evolution plays with humans and decides which characteristic
is suited
to person the best.
That is
why,
people
are not equal
physically
. In fact, Afro-American are faster and stronger than
people
of Eastern countries.

​Another reason
comes
from history. From ancient times, the white
people
managed Afro-American population and called them as
labourers
.
In most cases
, European
countries
was more developed than African,
so
people
, who came from there needed to earn money (we can
see
it
today
); either European civilization captured a
country
and controlled their inhabitants.
For example
, there are a
big
number of African
countries
which called as colony and
were managed
by European
countries
such as France, Portugal, Spain etc.

In conclusion
, I am of the opinion that the
government
should pass correct laws that
prevent
discrimination
people
.
Also
, they need to
analyse
social groups and their behavior to understand
people
and propagate to respect each
other
.
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IELTS essay Is it important that everyone in the society is treated in the same way? Why? /Why not? Write a 200-250 word essay. Discuss the questions above and give your view on how prejudice and discrimination might be overcome.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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