In this technical era the most of children spend their time on the internet using computers in early childhood, which have both merits such as increasing creativity level and learning educational programs and demerits which include health problem and behavioural problems in children's life.
To begin with, there are various positive effects of using computers in the early age of children. First and foremost is kids can improve level of creativity and a develop the highest milestone in the development of the brain and their growth in pre-school students. Secondly, some students have computers in primary school, which emphasizes on learning several subjects through computers. As a result, students easily find and learnt related to any courses on PS. For example, help of computers child remember new word and meaning as dictionary at available at the computer.
However, there are a number of negative impacts on children as they spend a long time on the PC playing games and listening to music. There are chances to damaging eye sight as students sitting in front of the computer for hours. Moreover, a child becoming introverted and homesick, these all lead to not participate in any sports activity in school and child gain weight as sedentary lifestyle. In other words, so many health issues create because of the modern era of science and technology.
In conclusion, having the technology and the computers kids will be becoming lazy and do not importance of outdoor sports activity, but the computer is also beneficial in many aspects as the educational purposes and learning creative ideas.
In this technical era the
most of children
spend their time on the internet using computers in early childhood, which have both merits such as increasing creativity level and learning educational programs and demerits which include health problem and
behavioural
problems in children's life.
To
begin
with, there are various
positive
effects of using computers in the early age of children.
First
and foremost is kids can
improve
level of creativity and
a develop
the highest milestone in the development of the brain and their growth in
pre-school
students
.
Secondly
,
some
students
have computers in primary school, which emphasizes on learning several subjects through computers.
As a result
,
students
easily
find and
learnt
related to any courses on PS.
For example
,
help
of computers child remember new word and meaning as dictionary at available at the computer.
However
, there are a number of
negative
impacts on children as they spend a long time on the PC playing games and listening to music. There are chances to damaging
eye sight
as
students
sitting in front of the computer for hours.
Moreover
, a child becoming introverted and homesick, these all lead to not participate in any sports activity in school and child gain weight as sedentary lifestyle.
In other words
,
so
many
health issues create
because
of the modern era of science and technology.
In conclusion
, having the technology and the computers kids will be becoming lazy and do not importance of outdoor sports activity,
but
the computer is
also
beneficial in
many
aspects as the educational purposes and learning creative
ideas
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes