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Is graffiti art or crime?

Is graffiti art or crime? r6a1l
Moving on to the last question, in my view is a better to arrange official street art graffiti events in order to prohibit graffiti vandalism. Firstly, some people express themselves through street art and most of them are already penalise, but still drawing on the buildings, so the penalty do not stop vandalism. Moreover the official festivals can attract a lot of youth, which would have a new pastime. The town council should hold special events to graffiti artist and lovers, also designate abandoned buildings to the graffiti festivals. Due to such events can be reduced graffiti vandalism and graffiti can be used to decorate the streets of the city. However, sometimes people nevertheless violate the legislations, therefore they should be punished and pay a fine. In conclusion, I still do believe that the best way to stop graffiti vandalism is to organize street art festivals.
Moving on to the last question, in my view is a better to arrange official
street
art graffiti
events
in order to prohibit graffiti
vandalism
.
Firstly
,
some
people
express themselves through
street
art and most of them are already
penalise
,
but
still
drawing on the buildings,
so
the penalty do not
stop
vandalism
.
Moreover
the official festivals can attract
a lot of
youth, which would have a new pastime. The town council should hold special
events
to graffiti artist and lovers,
also
designate abandoned buildings to the graffiti festivals. Due to such
events
can be
reduced
graffiti
vandalism
and graffiti can be
used
to decorate the
streets
of the city.
However
,
sometimes
people
nevertheless
violate the
legislations
,
therefore
they should
be punished
and pay a fine.
In conclusion
, I
still
do believe that the best way to
stop
graffiti
vandalism
is to organize
street
art festivals.
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