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Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.2

Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? v. 2
I BELIEVE, DEFINITELY IT IS ESSENTIAL TO HAVE OPENMINDED COMMUNITY, BECAUSE EVERYOEN OWNS A FREEEDOM OF FREE SPEAKING OF THEIR THOUGHTS. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS NUMEROUS REASONS BEHIND THE STATEMENT IN THE FAVOR OF FREEDOM WITH SPECIFIC NOTIONS IN DETAIL. WHEN IT COMES TO FREE SOCIETY, EVERYONE HAS RIGHTS TO EXPRESS THEIR THOUGHTS AS PER THEIR BELIEFE. HENCE, WHEN SOMEONE EXPRESS THEIR DIFFERNET THOUGHTS, REST OF THE FOLKS ARE TEND TO LISTEN TO UT AND IF LIKED BY MAJORITY IF MEMBER THEN THYE WOULD TRY THAT CHANGE BY IMLIMENTING AN IDEA. CONSEQUENTLY, THIS PROVIDA A CHANCE OF DIVER EXPERIENCE AND FEELING TO LIVE. FOR INSTANCE, THE SURVEY OF THE CANADIAN SOCIETY, 80% OF CANADIAN CITIZEN ENJOY THE CULTURE OF IMMIGRANT PEOPLE. ADDITIONALLY, IT COULD BE BENEFICIAL IN THE COUNTRY WHERE THEY STILL HAVE THE ANCIENT BELIEF. THIS FREEDOM WOULD BE THE REASON OF THE MODERN SOCIETY IN THOSE NATIONS. THUS, THEY HAVE THE OPPORTUNITY TO EXPLORE THE LATEST WAY OF LIVELIHOOD. AS A RESULT, THAT TERRITORY COULD BE IN THE RACE OF THE OTHER DEVELOPED TERRITORY. FOR INSTANCE, 40%OF THE INDIAN STATE WHERE SUCH RULES ARE STILL THERE WHERE NO INE CAN OBJECT THE LEADERS OPINION. WHAT EVE THE LEADER SAYS THEY HAVE TO OBAY THAT WHETHER THAT IS LIFE TREATENING FOR THEM AND THEIR FAMILY. IN CONCLUSION, FREEDOM INDEED PROVIDE A CONFIDENCE TO DISCUSS THE DIFFERENT VIEWS AMONG THE COMMUNITY WHO ARE READY TO LISTEN AND IF IT IS GOOD THAN THEY ARE READY TO ACCEPT AS WELL. NONETHELESS, THIS CAN NOT BE ACHIEVED BY ONLY ONE PERSON, THERE SHOULD BE SUPPORT FROM THE COMMUNITY AND INDIVIDUAL TOO.
I BELIEVE, DEFINITELY IT IS ESSENTIAL TO HAVE
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OPENMINDED
COMMUNITY,
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BECAUSE
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EVERYOEN
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OWNS
A
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FREEEDOM
OF FREE SPEAKING OF THEIR THOUGHTS. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS NUMEROUS REASONS BEHIND THE STATEMENT IN THE FAVOR OF FREEDOM WITH SPECIFIC NOTIONS IN DETAIL.

WHEN IT
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COMES
TO FREE SOCIETY, EVERYONE HAS RIGHTS TO EXPRESS THEIR THOUGHTS AS PER THEIR
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BELIEFE
.
HENCE
, WHEN SOMEONE EXPRESS THEIR
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DIFFERNET
THOUGHTS, REST OF THE FOLKS ARE
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TEND
TO LISTEN TO UT AND IF LIKED BY MAJORITY IF MEMBER THEN
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THYE
WOULD TRY THAT
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CHANGE
BY
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IMLIMENTING
AN
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IDEA
.
CONSEQUENTLY
, THIS
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PROVIDA
A CHANCE OF DIVER EXPERIENCE AND FEELING TO
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LIVE
.
FOR INSTANCE
, THE SURVEY OF THE CANADIAN SOCIETY, 80% OF CANADIAN CITIZEN ENJOY THE CULTURE OF IMMIGRANT
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PEOPLE
.

ADDITIONALLY
, IT COULD BE BENEFICIAL IN THE COUNTRY WHERE THEY
STILL
HAVE THE ANCIENT BELIEF. THIS FREEDOM WOULD BE THE REASON OF THE MODERN SOCIETY IN THOSE NATIONS.
THUS
, THEY HAVE THE OPPORTUNITY TO EXPLORE THE LATEST WAY OF LIVELIHOOD.
AS A RESULT
, THAT TERRITORY COULD BE IN THE RACE OF THE OTHER DEVELOPED TERRITORY.
FOR INSTANCE
, 40%OF THE INDIAN STATE WHERE SUCH
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RULES
ARE
STILL
THERE
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WHERE
NO INE CAN OBJECT THE LEADERS OPINION. WHAT EVE THE LEADER SAYS THEY
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HAVE TO
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OBAY
THAT WHETHER
THAT IS
LIFE
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TREATENING
FOR THEM AND THEIR FAMILY.

IN CONCLUSION
, FREEDOM
INDEED
PROVIDE A CONFIDENCE TO DISCUSS THE
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DIFFERENT
VIEWS AMONG THE COMMUNITY WHO ARE READY TO LISTEN AND IF IT IS
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GOOD
THAN THEY ARE READY TO ACCEPT
AS WELL
. NONETHELESS, THIS CAN NOT
BE ACHIEVED
BY
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ONLY
ONE PERSON, THERE SHOULD BE SUPPORT FROM THE COMMUNITY AND INDIVIDUAL TOO.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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