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I think there is a rising trend, especially amongst younger people to lean towards fast food. Luckily fast food in Vietnam is a little healthier than it might be in other places. Traditional foods like pho, fried rice, or banh mi, which can be considered street food are also given the fast-food label for their swift of service. So people who are short on time to eat, lean towards these kinds of meals as opposed to say, a hamburger. However, fast foods are gaining immense popularity, you can see it by the number of chain restaurants appearing around the country.
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IELTS essay is fast food popular in your country?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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4.0
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