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Is birthdays better to spent? Do you agree or disagree?

Is birthdays better to spent? Do you agree or disagree? OVw1k
Wishing you a very happy birthday Yara has an eventful year ahead with tons of happiness and success. Though we aren't able to talk or meet everyday, but d relationship of our friendship is freaking beautiful and will go forever man. Happy birthday ❤. Wishing you a very happy birthday Yara has an eventful year ahead with tons of happiness and success. Though we aren't able to talk or meet everyday, but d relationship of our friendship is freaking beautiful and will go forever man. Happy birthday ❤. Wishing you a very happy birthday Yara has an eventful year ahead with tons of happiness and success. Though we aren't able to talk or meet everyday, but d relationship of our friendship is freaking beautiful and will go forever man. Happy birthday ❤.
Wishing you a
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Yara
has an eventful year ahead with tons of happiness and success. Though we aren't able to talk or
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meet
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everyday
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d relationship of our friendship is freaking
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beautiful
and will go forever
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man
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Happy
birthday ❤.

Wishing you a
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very
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happy
birthday
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Yara
has an eventful year ahead with tons of happiness and success. Though we aren't able to talk or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
d relationship of our friendship is freaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
and will go forever
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Happy
birthday ❤.

Wishing you a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
happy
birthday
Possible spelling mistake found.
Yara
has an eventful year ahead with tons of happiness and success. Though we aren't able to talk or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
d relationship of our friendship is freaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
and will go forever
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Happy
birthday ❤.
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IELTS essay Is birthdays better to spent? Do you agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
132 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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