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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “iPads provide plenty of ways for teachers and students to enrich their lessons and ultimately to increase the quality of education.”

“iPads provide plenty of ways for teachers and students to enrich their lessons and ultimately to increase the quality of education. ” brejg
Nowadays, the technology is developed better to help the human. With the development of technology iPads have been invented to provide benefit for everyone. So I agree with the idea that iPAds contribute a number of ways for teachers and pupils to enhance their lessons and ultimately to increase the quality of education. This graph I will show you the reason why I think that. Overall, everything has not only benefit but also drawbacks and disadvantage. iPads can help me study well, enrich our khnowledge but if we don’t use fairly, it may affect on your health. Our quality of life attached to the technology so we should use it carefully. Firstly, our teachers’ lesson plan and textbooks are very old and not updated so the information and data on them are not right at this time. The book knowledge is only for reference and we can not use the information in the book in real life. If the life without iPads, without social networks, we cannot understand the current world situation as well as develop ourselves. Our knowledge is just limited by the data in the books that we use at school so we can not as well as the children in other countries. Secondly, the Internet can provide a huge information all over the world. At school, teachers can use laptop connected with TV to show the lessons for student or they can find some information about the world or in that past to make practical contact for the lesson. It is very useful for teachers and students. Although the lessons teaching by powerpoint make the quality of teaching is decreased if the Internet has problems, we can have a better lesons and do not feel sleepy when study the lesson about history or the subject that we don’t like. IPAds we use everyday can help us to learn well and find some advanced exercises to do. Finally, we have to use it carefully because it may harm your eyes. Spending too much time sufting the Internet your eyes will be damged. Ipads can make your lessons more interesting but if we don’t use right, we will have some health problems In cnclusion, everything has been invented to help people and enhance the quality of human’s life. Both students and teachers can use it to learn better. Using the Internet and the development of technology correctly is very important to increase the quality of education.
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technology
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the human. With the development of
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technology
iPads have
been invented
to provide benefit for everyone.
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iPAds
contribute a number of ways for
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teachers
and pupils to enhance their
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and
ultimately
to increase the
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quality
of education. This graph I will
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you the reason why I
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benefit
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drawbacks and disadvantage. iPads can
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help
me study
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well
, enrich our
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khnowledge
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if we don’t
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use
fairly
, it may
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affect
on your health. Our
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quality
of
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life
attached to the
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technology
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so
we should
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use
it
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, our
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teachers’
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lesson
plan and textbooks are
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old
and not updated
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the
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information
and data on them are not right at this time. The book knowledge is
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only
for
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reference and
we can not
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use
the
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information
in the book in real
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life
. If the
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life
without iPads, without social networks, we cannot understand the
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current
world situation as
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well
as develop ourselves. Our knowledge is
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just
limited by the data in the books that we
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use
at school
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so
we can not as
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well
as the children in other countries.

Secondly
, the Internet can provide a huge
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information
all over the world. At school,
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teachers
can
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use
laptop connected with TV to
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show
the
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lessons
for
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student or
they can find
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some
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information
about the world or in that past to
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make
practical contact for the
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lesson
. It is
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very
useful for
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teachers
and students. Although the
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lessons
teaching by
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powerpoint
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make
the
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quality
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if the Internet has problems, we can have a better
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and do not feel sleepy when study the
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lesson
about history or the subject that we don’t like.
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IPAds
we
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can
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help
us to learn
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well
and find
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advanced exercises to do.

Finally
, we
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damged
.
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more interesting
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if we don’t
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right, we will have
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some
health
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problems


In
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cnclusion
, everything has
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to
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help
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people
and enhance the
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quality
of human’s
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life
. Both students and
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teachers
can
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use
it to learn better. Using the Internet and the development of
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technology
correctly
is
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important
to increase the
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quality
of education.
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IELTS essay “iPads provide plenty of ways for teachers and students to enrich their lessons and ultimately to increase the quality of education. ”

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
407 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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