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Invite someone you don’t know well to dinner.

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Last month I invited my friends for dinner at home. It was Friday. I was working all day. After I came home, I planned to cook chicken with potatoes and buy some bread and soda. My mother wanted to visit us, especially to see my grandmother. The main reason for her visit is to help my grandmother shower. I didn't live with my mother anymore because I was here in Casablanca for an internship inside the accounting office. But, sometimes, my mother came to visit my grandmother and me. Currently, I'm living here in Casablanca with my grandmother. I remember when I came home, I saw my mother. I was stunned because I didn't expect that she would visit us and what surprised me was that my mother had already cooked the dinner. She prepared a fabulous salad and prepared everything I wanted to do, so I was grateful to my mother. I thanked her for everything she did for me, so it was evening. She decided to leave because she worked the next day, so I got her to the taxi station and stayed with her until she took a cab to Berrechid. The dinner was ready. I called my friends to come in. Moreover, a friend told me that he wanted to bring his friend. Thus I told him I didn't mind. I would be so pleased if your friend came he got his friend. So we had some fun, and we ate dinner. It was very delicious and wonderful because my mom cooked it. I greeted my guest. He was delighted because he had a wonderful time with us. We got to know each other. Furthermore, the guest is my friend now. He is a lovely, kind, funny, trustworthy, and incredible good person I've ever known so far. I'm very grateful to the day when I meet my friend.
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friends
for
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dinner
at home. It was Friday. I was working all day. After I
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came
home, I planned to cook chicken with potatoes and
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buy
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some
bread and soda.

My
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mother
wanted to
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visit
us,
especially
to
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see
my
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grandmother
. The main reason for her
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visit
is to
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help
my
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grandmother
shower.

I didn't
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live
with my
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mother
anymore
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because
I was here in Casablanca for an internship inside the accounting office.
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,
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sometimes
, my
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mother
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came
to
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visit
my
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grandmother
and me.

Currently
, I'm living here in Casablanca with my
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grandmother
. I remember when I
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came
home, I
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saw
my
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mother
. I
was stunned
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because
I didn't
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expect
that she would
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visit
us and what surprised me was that my
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mother
had already cooked the
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dinner
. She prepared a fabulous salad and prepared everything I wanted to do,
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so
I was grateful to my
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mother
. I thanked her for everything she did for me,
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so
it was evening. She decided to
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leave
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because
she worked the
next
day,
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so
I
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got
her to the taxi station and stayed with her until she took a cab to
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Berrechid
. The
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dinner
was ready. I called my
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friends
to
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come
in.

Moreover
, a
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friend
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told
me that he wanted to bring his
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friend
.
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I
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told
him I didn't mind. I would be
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so
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pleased
if your
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friend
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came
he
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got
his
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friend
.
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we had
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some
fun, and we ate
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dinner
. It was
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very
delicious and wonderful
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because
my mom cooked it. I greeted my guest. He
was delighted
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because
he had a wonderful time with us. We
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got
to know each other.
Furthermore
, the guest is my
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friend
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now
.

He is a lovely, kind,
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funny
, trustworthy, and incredible
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good
person I've ever known
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so
far. I'm
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very
grateful to the day when I
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meet
my
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friend
.
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IELTS essay Invite someone you don’t know well to dinner.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
312 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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