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Describe a problem you have faced recently,whether you agree or disagree

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Psychologists say that losing something is more worrisome and depressing than the happiness we feel when we earn or find something of equal price or value. This was something I just read but realised every bit of it when I lost a book that I received as a gift from a dear friend of mine. I will share this story with you. The book I lost was titled "Complete Collection Of Fyodor Dostoevsky". I was travelling to Portugal after completing my first year at the university a few months ago and met a school friend who moved to Portugal with her family many years ago. I spent some of the best vacation time in my life there, and just before the day I planned to return to my homeland, my friend - Emily, bought me a rare collection of this book. She told me that it was a gift for my upcoming birthday, which was three months later. And not to mention, it was a precious gift and I liked her idea of selecting this book for me. I was quite amazed by her generous gift idea and thanked her profoundly for such a thoughtful gift item. I kept the book in my handbag and my sole intention to keep it in my handbag was to read it on my return journey. I must have been very careless not to look after it properly, and I believe I dropped it somewhere at the airport. To my wildest horror, when I searched for the book in my bag, I could not find it anywhere. I rummaged my bag and it was nowhere! It was such a sad moment! The book was a gift from a dear friend and she spent a considerable amount of money to buy me one of the rarest editions of this book. It was quite an important gift to me and losing it was a depressing experience, to say the least. I could do virtually nothing to retrieve the lost book as I was not sure where I had dropped it. I might have dropped it inside the taxi that I took to reach the airport, or at one of the coffee shops or somewhere at the airport. So, apart from sending an email to the airport, I had very few options
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every bit of it when I lost a
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that I received as a
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from a dear
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friend
of mine. I will share this story with you.

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was titled
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Complete Collection Of
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Fyodor
Dostoevsky
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. I was travelling to Portugal after completing my
first
year at the university a few months ago and met a school
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friend
who
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moved
to Portugal with her family
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years ago. I spent
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of the best vacation time in my life there, and
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just
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the day I planned to return to my homeland, my
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friend
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Emily,
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me a rare collection of this
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. She
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me that it was a
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for my upcoming birthday, which was three months later. And not to mention, it was a precious
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gift
and I liked her
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idea
of selecting this
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for me.

I was quite amazed by her generous
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and thanked her
profoundly
for such a thoughtful
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item. I
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kept
the
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in my handbag and my sole intention to
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it in my handbag was to read it on my return journey.
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careless not to look after it
properly
, and I believe I dropped it somewhere at the
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airport
. To my wildest horror, when I searched for the
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book
in my bag, I could not find it anywhere. I rummaged my bag and it was nowhere! It was such a sad moment!

The
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book
was a
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from a dear
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friend and
she spent a considerable amount of money to
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buy
me one of the rarest editions of this
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book
. It was quite an
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important
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gift
to me and losing it was a depressing experience, to say the least.

I could do
virtually
nothing to retrieve the lost
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book
as I was not sure where I had dropped it. I might have dropped it inside the taxi that I took to reach the
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airport
, or at one of the coffee shops or somewhere at the
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airport
.
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, apart from sending an email to the
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, I had
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IELTS essay Describe a problem you have faced recently, whether you agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
384 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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