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Introduction to tourism? some people believe that it is postive and some believe that it is worth les

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Humans are curious to accumulate new experiences in day-to-day life and ready to explore certain world regions to seek novelties. People might have innumerable ways to explore the world. Generally speaking, tourism can be the best way to find out the unique features of any geographic location. To be more specific, in this research, cultural/heritage tourism will be used extensively as the core element to conduct the following study. Culture tourism is the most ubiquitous sector of the tourism industry. Fortunately, numerous pieces of literature and analyses have been published in this extensive-term. However, this research will shed much light on heritage tourism, a niche market segment of culture Tourism that will be explained by connecting essential dots. Practically, the whole research has been divided into three significant chapters to understand the entire phenomenon; Consequently, each chapter deals with exquisite and makes the analysis much transparent. Briefly, the opening chapter will make easy to understand the term ‘tourism’ by combining definitions, history, and innovation in that industry. Secondly, the middle chapter, which is wholly based on the term ‘Heritage’ and the term heritage, will be studied extensively. All the possible ways and angles will be examined pedantically to have an explicit understanding of heritage. However, it is a must to know about heritage tourism, which can actually be learned after the second chapter of this research. In addition, the closing chapter would be the most valuable chapter of the fundamental research as it will consist of a case study of the iconic monument of Poland ‘Malbork castle’. Moreover, it will also give an understanding of how heritage management work in Poland? Furthermore, many essential answers will be found out after the end of chapter three. As the research goes ahead, the general, specific goals and why this research was conducted will be answered in the following section. In the end, the study will be closed with some experts’ reviews and suggestions.
Humans are curious to accumulate new experiences in day-to-day life and ready to explore certain world regions to seek novelties.
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People
might have innumerable ways to explore the world.
Generally
speaking,
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tourism
can be the best way to find out the unique features of any geographic location. To be more specific, in this
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research
, cultural/heritage
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tourism
will be
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used
extensively
as the core element to conduct the following study.

Culture
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tourism
is the most ubiquitous sector of the
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tourism
industry.
Fortunately
, numerous pieces of literature and analyses have
been published
in this extensive-term.
However
, this
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research
will shed much light on
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heritage
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tourism
, a niche market segment of culture
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Tourism
that will be
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explained
by connecting essential dots.
Practically
, the whole
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research
has
been divided
into three significant
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chapters
to understand the entire phenomenon;
Consequently
, each
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chapter
deals with exquisite and
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makes
the analysis much transparent.
Briefly
, the opening
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chapter
will
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make
easy to understand the term
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‘tourism’
by combining definitions, history, and innovation in that industry.
Secondly
, the middle
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chapter
, which is wholly based on the term
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‘Heritage’
and the term
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heritage
, will
be studied
extensively
. All the possible ways and angles will
be examined
pedantically
to have an explicit understanding of
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heritage
.
However
, it is a
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must to
know about
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heritage
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tourism
, which can actually
be learned
after the second
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chapter
of this research.

In addition
, the closing
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chapter
would be the most valuable
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chapter
of the fundamental
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research
as it will consist of a case study of the iconic monument of Poland ‘
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Malbork
castle’.
Moreover
, it will
also
give an understanding of how
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heritage
management work in Poland?
Furthermore
,
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many
essential answers will
be found
out after the
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end
of
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chapter
three. As the
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research
goes ahead, the general, specific goals and why this
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research
was conducted
will
be answered
in the following section. In the
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end
, the study will
be closed
with
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some
experts’ reviews and suggestions.
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IELTS essay Introduction to tourism? some people believe that it is postive and some believe that it is worth les

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
321 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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