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Introduction of topic in many countries the most common solution for criminal behavior is prison but mant believe that eduction is a better way...

Introduction of topic in many countries the most common solution for criminal behavior is prison but mant believe that eduction is a better way. . . w7JPE
Rules and regulations are made for the smooth flow of society. Some people break that laws owing to numerous reasons. However, beaucoup punishments are there to make them realise their faults. The most traditional method of disciplining is putting them behind the bars. Although, this way is conventional yet, it is less effective. Some of the individuals think that counselling, interaction and communication could be a zenith track to resolve their worst behavior regarding community. In the advent, in several ways education can assist someone to overcome ridiculous nature. Since childhood, parents should raise their child by good manners as well as with ethical values so that in future their kids could not take any step that is not favourable for society. By adding something in criminal's knowledge, it may lead to brain wash and modify it to a better path. On the other side, undoubtedly, education can give a track for anyone which can lead to a bright future. Yet, in daily life, alot of beings are there who are unemployed and the living conditions are not so good for them. Many of them chose to commit crimes due to lack of money, space and so on basic necessities. So in this way, somehow, only education could not be a better technique to get rid this issue. That's why imprisonment is also vital for the sake of realisation of crime. In the nutshell, both matters are equally important. Governments should take criminal to the prisons and there they should render them the education about the laws and turn their minds into a positive side.
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Rules
and regulations
are made
for the smooth flow of society.
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Some
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people
break that laws owing to numerous reasons.
However
,
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beaucoup
punishments are there to
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make
them
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realise
their faults. The most traditional method of disciplining is putting them behind the bars. Although, this way is conventional
yet
, it is less effective.
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
Some of the
individuals
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think
that counselling, interaction and communication could be a zenith
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track
to resolve their worst behavior regarding community. In the advent, in several
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "ways'" or "way's"?
ways
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education
can assist someone to overcome ridiculous nature. Since childhood, parents should raise their child by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
manners
as well
as with ethical values
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so
that in future their kids could not take any step
that is
not
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favourable
for society. By adding something in criminal's knowledge, it may lead to brain wash and modify it to a better path. On the other side,
undoubtedly
,
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education
can give a
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track
for anyone which can lead to a bright future.
Yet
, in daily life,
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alot
of beings are there who
are unemployed
and the living conditions are not
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so
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good
for them.
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Many
of them chose to commit crimes due to lack of money, space and
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so
on
Consider using "necessities".
basic necessities
.
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So
in this way, somehow,
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only
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education
could not be a better technique to
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get
rid this issue. That's why imprisonment is
also
vital for the sake of
Possible spelling mistake. 'realisation' is British English.
realisation
of crime. In the nutshell, both matters are
equally
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important
.
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Governments
should take criminal to the prisons and there they should render them the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
about the laws and turn their minds into a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
side.
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IELTS essay Introduction of topic in many countries the most common solution for criminal behavior is prison but mant believe that eduction is a better way. . .

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1 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
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