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introduction my favourite city live

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Di An city in Binh Duong province • Di An city in the Southeast region • Recognized as a city on January 10, 2020 • Currently, Di An is the center of industry and economy and is the district-level administrative unit with the second largest population of Binh Duong province after Thuan An city. • In addition, Di An city has the third largest population in the country • In terms of education, the City has more than 42 public schools, including 33 schools that meet national standards
Di An city in
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Binh
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Duong
province

• Di An city in the Southeast region

• Recognized as a city on January 10, 2020

•
Currently
, Di An is the center of industry and economy and is the district-level administrative unit with the second largest population of
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Binh
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Duong
province after
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Thuan
An city.

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In addition
, Di An city has the third largest population in the country

• In terms of education, the City has more than 42 public schools, including 33 schools that
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national standards
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IELTS essay introduction my favourite city live

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2 paragraphs
87 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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