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Introduction if you were running into a serious legal problems

Introduction if you were running into a serious legal problems OQg3
Happily, most international students complete their courses without running into any serious legal problems, but if you do find yourself involved in a legal dispute of any kind, ask for help. There are two options. First, contact the students' union or welfare officer. Even if they cannot help you directly, they should be able to advise you where to go for help. The second possibility is to contact the Citizens Advice Bureau in your area. You can find them in the local telephone directory. They will be able to recommend a solicitor if you need one, and tell you if there is a local law centre providing free legal advice. They will also be able to tell you whether you can claim legal aid to help pay for any court and legal fees. Let me give you some basic information about the police. The police have the power to stop and search anyone who appears to be behaving in a suspicious manner. If you are arrested for any reason, even if you know it to be a wrong reason, remember a few very important things. One, don't be aggressive. Two, do not try to bribe the police officer. Three, if you are arrested by plain-clothes police officers, ask to see some form of identification. Four, give your true name and address if the officer asks you to. Lying to the police is a criminal offence. Five, do not sign any statement until you have received advice from a solicitor. There is always a solicitor on duty at every police station. Six, you will be entitled to make one telephone call. If you use this call to telephone a friend, urge your friend to contact someone from your university or from the students' union and get advice about what you should do next. If you find yourself in trouble with the police, it is very important to get professional advice. Contact any of the following: your university welfare officer, the students' union at your university, your local Citizens Advice Bureau, a local law centre. If you are found guilty of an offence, it could seriously damage your position as an international student, so be sure to ask for help as early in the process as possible. Remember: obey the local laws! The laws here may not be quite the same as in your own country. Here are a few examples of actions that are illegal here. It is against the law to: possess offensive weapons, e. g. knives, guns, chemical sprays used for personal defence—even women are not allowed to carry sprays or other deterrents to protect themselves against possible assault—except for rape alarms, possess or supply hard or soft drugs, disturb the peace — this is called "disorderly conduct". This means that you can be arrested for being too noisy or rowdy. A few words about drinking. In this country, it is perfectly acceptable for adults to drink alcohol in moderate amounts. For many people, drinking is an established part of their social life—"going out for a drink" is how they relax or spend time with friends. If you go to a party or visit people at home in the evening, your host will probably offer you a drink. Often a lot of university social life can revolve around drinking, especially for undergraduates. Do not be surprised if people arrange to meet in a bar or if events are held in a pub. But you are not obliged to drink alcohol if you do not want to even if you are in a pub or at a party where everyone else is drinking. You can always ask for a non-alcoholic drink instead. And if you feel uncomfortable going to places that serve alcohol, explain this to your friends—there are lots of other places where you can meet. If you do choose to drink, remember that you should never drive a motor vehicle after drinking alcohol—it is dangerous and the police can impose serious penalties on you. Also remember that being drunk in public is not acceptable either, and the police can arrest you for it. Drugs and alcohol can cause serious problems. Let me repeat that in this country, it is illegal to use drugs, except under medical supervision. But, if you do use illegal drugs and you develop a problem, there are organizations you can contact. Contact your students' union or your student counsellor. Anyone over 18 years old can legally buy and consume alcoholic drinks in this country, but if you think you might be drinking too much, get help and advice from your student counsellor or your doctor. Again, there are special organisations that can help you with drug and alcohol problems. Contact them.
Happily
, most international
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complete their courses without running into any serious
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problems
,
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if you do find yourself involved in a
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dispute of any kind,
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ask
for
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. There are two options.
First
,
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contact
the
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students'
union or welfare
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officer
. Even if they cannot
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you
directly
, they should be able to advise you where to go for
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help
. The second possibility is to
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contact
the Citizens
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Advice
Bureau in your area. You can find them in the
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local
telephone directory. They will be able to recommend a solicitor if you need one, and
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tell
you if there is a
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local
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law
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centre
providing free
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legal
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advice
. They will
also
be able to
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tell
you whether you can claim
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aid to
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pay for any court and
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fees.
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me give you
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basic information about the
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police
. The
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police
have the power to
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stop
and search anyone who appears to be behaving
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in a suspicious manner
. If you
are arrested
for any reason, even if you know it to be a
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wrong
reason,
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remember
a few
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important
things. One, don't be aggressive. Two, do not try to bribe the
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police
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officer
. Three, if you
are arrested
by plain-clothes
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police
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officers
,
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ask
to
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see
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some
form of identification. Four, give your true name and address if the
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officer
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asks
you to. Lying to the
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police
is a criminal
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offence
. Five, do not
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sign
any statement until you have received
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advice
from a solicitor. There is always a solicitor on duty at every
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police
station. Six, you will
be entitled
to
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one telephone call. If you
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use
this call to telephone a friend, urge your friend to
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contact
someone from your
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university
or from the
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students'
union and
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get
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advice
about what you should do
next
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police
, it is
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very
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important
to
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get
professional
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advice
.
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any of the following: your
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university
welfare
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officer
, the
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students'
union at your
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university
, your
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local
Citizens
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Advice
Bureau, a
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law
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centre
. If you
are found
guilty of an
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offence
, it could
seriously
damage your position as an international
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student
,
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so
be sure to
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ask
for
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as early in the process as possible.
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Remember
: obey the
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local
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laws
! The
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here may not be quite the same as in your
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own
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country
. Here are a few examples of actions that are illegal here. It is against the
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law
to: possess offensive weapons,
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e. g.
knives, guns, chemical sprays
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used
for personal
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defence
—even women are not
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allowed
to carry sprays or other deterrents to protect themselves against possible assault—
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except for
rape alarms, possess or supply
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hard
or soft
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drugs
, disturb the peace — this
is called
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"
disorderly conduct
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"
. This means that you can
be arrested
for being too noisy or rowdy. A few words about
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drinking
. In this
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country
, it is
perfectly
acceptable for adults to
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drink
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alcohol
in moderate amounts. For
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many
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people
,
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drinking
is an established part of their social life—
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"
going out for a drink
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"
is how they relax or spend time with friends. If you go to a party or visit
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people
at home in the evening, your host will
probably
offer you a
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drink
.
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Often
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a lot of
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university
social life can revolve around
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drinking
,
especially
for undergraduates. Do not
be surprised
if
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people
arrange to
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meet
in a bar or if
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events
are held
in a pub.
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you are not obliged to
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drink
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alcohol
if you do not want to even if you are in a pub or at a party where everyone else is
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drinking
. You can always
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ask
for a non-alcoholic
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drink
instead
. And if you feel uncomfortable going to places that serve
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alcohol
,
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explain
this to your friends—there are lots of other places where you can
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meet
. If you do choose to
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drink
,
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remember
that you should never drive a motor vehicle after
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drinking
alcohol—it is
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dangerous
and the
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police
can impose serious penalties on you.
Also
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remember
that
being drunk
in public is not acceptable either, and the
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police
can arrest you for it.
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Drugs
and
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alcohol
can cause serious
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problems
.
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Let
me repeat that in this
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country
, it is illegal to
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use
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drugs
, except under medical supervision.
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But
, if you do
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use
illegal
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drugs
and you develop a
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problem
, there are organizations you can
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contact
.
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your
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students'
union or your
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student
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counsellor
. Anyone over 18 years
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old
can
legally
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buy
and consume alcoholic
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drinks
in this
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country
,
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but
if you
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think
you might be
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drinking
too much,
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get
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help
and
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advice
from your
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student
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counsellor
or your doctor. Again, there are special
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organisations
that can
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help
you with
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drug
and
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alcohol
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problems
.
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Contact
them.
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IELTS essay Introduction if you were running into a serious legal problems

Essay
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1 paragraphs
787 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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