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Islom: Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people.Some people say that goverments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money

Islom: Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that goverments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money XREE
Islom: Nowadayas people are speaking common languages, so there is a risk of losing their language. Some believe the government should spend a lot of money for to keep the language, while others consider it a waste of money. I believe if the government spend of money for to keep the language, the language will be preserved On the hand. People are speaking common languages. For example English and Russian languages, because this countries are industrialized. Everyone wants to live this countries. people are speaking this languages, so their language is disappearing. Some consider it a waste of money to preserve the language. Firstly, the government should open up places where the language is taught perfectly. people need experienced teachers to teach the language. For this the government has to spend a lot of money. Secondly, the government should increase the lucrative of language teacher in schools and collages. This efforts are useless. So if people do not have a comfortable place to live, they will live in developed country as well as learning other languages. On the another hand. Some believe the government should spend of money for to keep the language. The country need to be developed to preserve the language. The government should spend a lot of money on the development to of the country. Then, the langauage learning will increase. For example the government should increase the salaries of all workers and build recreation areas for people to relax. Young people are learning English and Russian languages. They think, it is easy to study abroad. The government should create condition for a young people to study so that they do not go abroad. The government should build schools and collages with quality and bring in experienced teachers In conlusion, people are speaking common languages and their language is disappearing. I belive if the government should create conveniences for the people, the language will be preserved
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a lot of
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keep
the
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language
, while others consider it a waste of
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money
. I believe if the
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government
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spend
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money
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language
, the
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English and Russian
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languages
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this
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countries
are industrialized
. Everyone wants to
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live
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countries
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people
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this
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,
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their
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language
is disappearing.
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Some
consider it a waste of
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money
to preserve the
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language
.
Firstly
, the
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government
should open up places where the
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language
is taught
perfectly
.
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people
need experienced teachers to teach the
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language
. For this the
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government
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has to
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spend
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a lot of
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money
.
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, the
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government
should increase
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the lucrative of
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teacher in schools and collages.
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efforts are useless.
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if
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people
do not have a comfortable place to
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in developed
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as well
as learning other languages.

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for to
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the
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language
. The
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country
need to
be developed
to preserve the
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language
. The
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government
should
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spend
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a lot of
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money
on the development to of the
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country
. Then, the
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learning will increase.
For example
the
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government
should increase the salaries of all workers and build recreation areas for
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people
to relax. Young
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people
are learning English and Russian
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languages
. They
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think
, it is easy to study abroad. The
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government
should create condition for a young
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people
to study
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so
that they do not go abroad. The
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government
should build schools and collages with quality and bring in experienced teachers

In
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conlusion
,
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people
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languages
and their
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language
is disappearing.
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should create conveniences for the
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people
, the
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will be
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IELTS essay Islom: Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that goverments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
318 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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