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I’m thin, I’m 21 years old. I’m studying at Hung Vuong university and my major is the English language. Now, I’m learning English at Gemmaedu center. I want to improve all my English skills, I hope that after studying for 2 months I can talk with foreigners. My favorite sport is football, when I have free time I like listening to music, reading books and playing games. My family has 5 people, my parents, my older sister, my younger brother, and me. I want to become an international businessman in the future and help many needy people have general knowledge and experiences about business. After graduating from university, I want to study master's degree in Italy.
I’m thin, I’m 21 years
old
. I’m studying at Hung
Vuong
university and my major is the English language.
Now
, I’m learning English at
Gemmaedu
center. I want to
improve
all my English
skills
, I hope that after studying for 2 months I can talk with foreigners.

My favorite sport is football, when I have free time I like listening to music, reading books and playing games.

My family has 5
people
, my parents, my older sister, my younger brother, and me.

I want to become an international businessman in the future and
help
many
needy
people
have general knowledge and experiences about business.

After graduating from university, I want to study master's degree in Italy.
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IELTS essay introduction baout myself

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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