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Digital Libraries are very important

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Topic sentences: One benefit of an electronic library is that it is convenient for users. Because it can help people find the information they need easily with just a few simple steps while the book library will waste people’s time in finding information and documents. The second benefit of an electronic libraries is that it does not take up space. Electronic library can help us find information easily and do not consume space. But electronic library also have disadvantages, the first disadvantages is the reliability of information. Bcause not all information will be completely accurate for users while the book library can provide information with certainty. The second disadvantages of an electronic libraries is that some groups of people will not be able to access it. Because to be able to access it, the user’s smartphone or computer device must be connected to the internet.
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they need
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just
a few simple steps while the book library will waste
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people
’s time in finding
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information
and documents. The second benefit of an
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electronic
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libraries
is that it does not take up space.
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library can
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information
easily
and do not consume space.
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electronic
library
also
have disadvantages, the
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disadvantages is the reliability of
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.
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not all
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information
will be completely accurate for users while the book library can provide
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information
with certainty. The second disadvantages of an
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electronic
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libraries
is that
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some
groups of
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people
will not be able to access it.
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to be able to access it, the user’s smartphone or computer device
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to the internet.
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IELTS essay Digital Libraries are very important

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