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Why people should be a generous person and what is the benefit?

Why people should be a generous person and what is the benefit? Mqgre

A generous person gives a hand to others while expecting not reward. A person immediately comes into my mind is Bill Gates, who has donated most of his wealth to donate. Being a generous person is important, because helping others has a powerful impact on our relationships with others. It connects us to friends, family, and colleagues. It also boots happiness and strengths communities. What is more, when people give freely, they also put themselves on the path to a happier and healthier life. It is a process that helps receivers as well as enriches givers

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IELTS essay Why people should be a generous person and what is the benefit?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

95 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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