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Talk about a problem that you have had at school or at home

Talk about a problem that you have had at school or at home 0wYEB
Like everyone, I also have to endure a lot of pressure and stress in studying. I'm not good at math. I only remember math formulas at that time or near, and after about a month I only remember through so I always get bad grades. I am very disappointed and depressed about myself. I didn’t want to be so anymore. I asked my friend for help. She gave me some useful advice. She advised me to study harder and do all the homework. In class, I should pay attention to what the teacher said and remember its content, then much more practice. She also said that when I had a problem, I could ask her for help. I tried to study harder and do more exercise. I rewrote the formula whenever I had free time and stick it on the wall to see every day Now, it seems that my score has increased significantly. I feel happy and more lucid.
Like everyone, I
also
have to
endure
a lot of
pressure and
stress
in studying. I'm not
good
at math. I
only
remember math formulas at that time or near, and after about a month I
only
remember through
so
I always
get
bad
grades.
I
am
very
disappointed and depressed about myself.

I
didn’t want to be
so
anymore.
I
asked my friend for
help
. She gave me
some
useful advice. She advised me to study harder and do all the homework.

In
class
, I should pay attention to what the teacher said and remember its content, then much more practice. She
also
said that when I had a problem, I could ask her for
help
.

I tried to study harder and do more exercise. I rewrote the formula whenever I had free time and stick it on the wall to
see
every day

Now
, it seems that my score has increased
significantly
.
I
feel happy and more lucid.
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IELTS essay Talk about a problem that you have had at school or at home

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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