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Introducing yourself during the pandemic

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The hobbies where I spend my free time vary as I age. I currently enjoy analyzing advertisements from other countries by identifying the aim and how this progress until now. Lastly, I have developed a love for reading non-fiction books, especially books related to the human body. The field of medicine piqued my interest as early as the age of six and has been an integral part of myself since then. I also remember being fascinated with the human body that I vividly recall most of the pages in the first book that I bought about the human body. The pandemic has allowed me to pace myself and gave me time to work on unfinished projects and to seek new experiences. A few of the things that I love doing since being locked in our homes are doing photo restorations using Adobe Photoshop and creating advertisements. For the past few years, we overlook freedom in a society where high expectations are placed upon us. We often push ourselves to the limits in our respective careers, thinking that we always have time to do later in life. However, we cannot predict when the time of us being free birds will end and will be locked into cages. Being quarantined physically and having limited means to satisfy ourselves, freedom seems a glimpse of time that we should treasure.
The hobbies where I spend my free
time
vary as I age. I
currently
enjoy analyzing advertisements from other countries by identifying the aim and how this progress until
now
.
Lastly
, I have developed a
love
for reading non-fiction books,
especially
books related to the human body. The field of medicine piqued my interest as early as the age of six and has been an integral part of myself since then. I
also
remember
being fascinated
with the human body that I
vividly
recall most of the pages in the
first
book that I
bought
about the human body.

The pandemic has
allowed
me to pace myself and gave me
time
to work on unfinished projects and to seek new experiences. A few of the things that I
love
doing since
being locked
in our homes are doing photo restorations using Adobe Photoshop and creating advertisements.

For the past few years, we overlook freedom in a society where high expectations
are placed
upon us. We
often
push ourselves to the limits in our respective careers, thinking that we always have
time
to do later in life.
However
, we cannot predict when the
time
of us being free birds will
end
and will
be locked
into cages.
Being quarantined
physically
and having limited means to satisfy ourselves, freedom seems a glimpse of
time
that we should treasure.
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IELTS essay Introducing yourself during the pandemic

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
226 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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