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Drug addiction is a neusance to modern society

Drug addiction is a neusance to modern society 5aV9A
In this contemporary world, drug addiction problem looming each day. This essay will articulate same of its problem such as unemployment and also peer pressure and some possible solution to allievate. To commence with, there are plethora cause of drug addiction first and foremost is Unemployment, To Elaborate it, these days students have no job and also have a lot strees. They confront various type of the problem have no work then how to fullfil their needs and also what do in future so on due to they take drug. Moreover, cut off threat competition in many field such as police and also the main study. They feel to be feel rejuvenating then they take drug. Secondly, sometimes person have a peer pressure to take Drug and have curiousty. Then they try to taste of drug and take again. As a result they become addicted. Moving further, there are numerous solution how to tackle this problem. Firstly, government should take step for drug addiction then they make rule for every one if person have a no preception for take medicine for example survey conducted by America if person have a take medicine on medicine shop and must perception necessary without otc they don't buy medicine on shop as a result, this way stop drug addiction in the society. In conclusion, drug is extremely detrimental effect on the society.
In this contemporary world,
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drug
addiction
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problem
looming each day. This essay will articulate same of its
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problem
such as unemployment and
also
peer pressure and
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some
possible solution to
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allievate
. To commence with, there are plethora cause of
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drug
addiction
first
and foremost is Unemployment, To Elaborate it, these days students have no job and
also
have a
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lot strees
. They confront various type of the
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problem
have no work then how to
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fullfil
their needs and
also
what do in future
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so
on due to they take
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drug
.
Moreover
,
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cut
off threat competition in
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many field
such as police and
also
the main study. They feel to be
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feel
rejuvenating then they take
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drug
.
Secondly
,
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sometimes
person have a peer pressure to take
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Drug
and have
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curiousty
. Then they try to taste of
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drug
and take again.
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As
a result they become addicted. Moving
further
, there are numerous solution how to tackle this
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problem
.
Firstly
,
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government
should take step for
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drug
addiction then they
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make
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rule
for every one if person have a no
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preception
for take
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medicine
for example
survey conducted by America if person have a take
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medicine
on
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medicine
shop and
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must
perception necessary without
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otc
they don't
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buy
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medicine
on shop
as a result
, this way
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stop
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drug
addiction in the society.
In conclusion
,
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drug
is
extremely
detrimental effect on the society.
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IELTS essay Drug addiction is a neusance to modern society

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
228 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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