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Introduce yourself briefly

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My name is Phó Hoàng Ngọc Nhi. I was born in Ho Chi Minh City. Being born in a modern, friendly, enthusiastic city, so I consider myself a typical city girl who has similar personality traits to this beautiful city. Beside that, I can work well under pressure, and I have never missed a deadline. My biggest weakness is that I tend to be overly critical of myself. Whenever I complete a project, I can’t help but feel that I could have done more even if my work received a positive response. This often leads me to overwork myself and leaves me feeling burned out.
My name is
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Phó
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Hoàng
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Nhi
. I
was born
in Ho Chi Minh City.
Being born
in a modern, friendly, enthusiastic city,
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so
I consider myself a typical city girl who has similar personality traits to this
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beautiful
city. Beside that, I can work well under pressure, and I have never missed a deadline. My biggest weakness is that I tend to be
overly
critical of myself. Whenever I complete a project, I can’t
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help
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but
feel that I could have done more even if my work received a
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positive
response. This
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often
leads me to overwork myself and
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leaves
me feeling burned out.
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IELTS essay Introduce yourself briefly

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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